Shadow Knight

Granted, but you fail your course and flunk out of school entirely, and end up on the doll. I wish I got paid more at work.

Does anyone have any good suggestions on how I could go about skipping ten years between two chapters, without actually stating that ten years have gone by? For now I've ...

Yes time has passed, and to be honest I couldn't think of a good way to super impose text on the reader's imagination that says "Ten years later". If anyone ...

Chapter Two - Entanglements A lanky young man in his late teens, with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached a small house, just outside of the wall of ...

Not bad. Like I said, I think you mostly need to work on how you word things and where you place punctuation. Sometimes I think you can't find a certain ...

This has been updated. Chapter one is finished, enjoy! Criticism would be appreciated!

What, forgot about me did we Niteowl? Cause I sure remember all of you. :P

I am unbelievably awesome, aren't I? ^^

Wyes' ten commandments. You shall not inflict pain upon those who don't deserve it.. You shall never lie, unless the situation is dire. You shall always uphold justice. You shall ...

Granted, but it gives you cancer. I wish I were more motivated.

Mawvaye is in charge... And he'll always be in charge unless somebody does something about it. - Wyes What are you afraid of?

Something to do with the 5538 posts, hmm?

Green = Suggested Correction , oh how he rembered remembered and sent him spawling sprawling onto his back Silly mistakes! Seriously, the best things you can do before you post ...

Congratulations Big K, you finally did it.

With a vengeance!